new captions and stuff

so i've put aside my fears of all the other jargon that goes on in final cut pro (our editing software), and i've figured out how to put captions and a logo in the corner of the screen.
going for the cool mtv look. back in the early nineties when mtv actually was cool...
remember wacky presenters...of crazy european varieties...
and when they used to play music. remember that?
anyway...
what do you reckon?
maybe we need a new logo for this purpose?
do you think it looks too commercial? pauline does...maybe...
i think it looks kinda pro...even though we are not going for pro...
so?